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Notices, emails, texts and policies. Replace everything in braces, and have counsel review the subscriber notice for your states.
SKUS AND RISES sku: old price -> new price (break-even loss %)
REASON one sentence, naming the cost:
WHAT WE ABSORBED $ or % of the cost we're not passing on:
TIERS any new Good / Best versions instead of a rise:
SUBSCRIBERS notice date(s) inside each state's window;
grandfather: yes/no, end date:
REPEAT BUYERS email date; stock-up window from ... to ...;
quantity cap:
LOYALTY TAX FIXES rows from the table fixed before the date:
PRICE PROTECTION window, refund or credit, where it's shown:
COMPARISON staggered SKUs / last year's cohort / affected
vs unaffected; baseline saved on:
READS day 90: ... day 180: ... owner:
COUNSEL REVIEWED notice, pack changes, fee lines: date / name
SUBJECT A Price Change for Your {Product} Subscription
PREVIEW what's changing on {date}, and what stays the same
Hi {first_name},
On {date}, the price of your {product} subscription will go from
${old} to ${new} per {delivery}. Your next charge at the new price
will be on {first_new_charge_date}.
Why: {one sentence naming the cost, e.g. "the duty on the bottles
we import rose to 12.5% in July."} We're absorbing {part} of that
ourselves.
{If grandfathering:} Because you've been with us {since/for ...},
your price stays at ${old} until {end_date}.
Nothing else changes: same product, same schedule. You can skip,
change your delivery date or product, or cancel anytime here:
{manage_link}. If you have questions, reply to this email and
{name} will answer.
{Name}, {title}
{Brand} · {postal address}
This is a service message about your subscription.
Manage your subscription: {manage_link}
Email preferences or unsubscribe from marketing: {unsubscribe_link}
SUBJECT Our Prices Change on {Date}. Here's Your Heads-Up
PREVIEW you can still order at today's price until {date}
Hi {first_name},
You've ordered {product} from us before, so you're hearing this
before anyone else: on {date}, {product} goes from ${old} to ${new}.
Why: {one sentence naming the cost}.
Until {date}, you can order at today's price. {Limit: up to
{n} per order.} [Order at ${old}]
And if we ever lower the price of something within {window} days
of your order, we'll refund the difference. Just reply to your
order email.
{Name}
{Brand} · {postal address}
You're receiving this because you bought from {Brand}.
Unsubscribe: {unsubscribe_link}
{Brand}: Hi {first_name}, on {date} your {product} subscription
goes from ${old} to ${new} because {short reason}. Skip, change
or cancel anytime: {link}. Reply STOP to opt out
PRICE PROTECTION
If we lower the price of an item within {14/30} days of your
order, we'll refund the difference to your original payment
method {or: as store credit, if you prefer}. Reply to your order
confirmation or email {support_email} with your order number.
This applies to our own prices on {brand}.com, including sales.
It doesn't apply to {clearance items marked final sale}.
Thanks for asking, {first_name}. {Product} went from ${old} to
${new} on {date} because {reason}. We absorbed {part} of it and
passed on the rest.
{If they missed the window:} Since you're a regular, I've
{applied your last price to this order / added a ${x} credit}.
That's a one-time courtesy.
{If a subscriber:} You can skip, change or cancel anytime here:
{manage_link}.
PRODUCT PAGE, NEXT TO THE PRICE
Now {new size} (was {old size}). Price per {unit}: ${new_unit}
(was ${old_unit}). Why we changed it: {one sentence}.
EMAIL LINE TO RECENT BUYERS
A heads-up: your next {product} will be {new size}, down from
{old size}, at the same ${price}. {If subscriber: We've moved
your delivery to every {n} days so you won't run short.}
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Written by Andrew Lauchner, a growth and retention operator for consumer brands. The paid work is one ninety-day Sprint.
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