Messages for stockouts, retirements and reformulations, and two internal forms. Adapt the voice; keep the structure.
Marketing messages go only to people who’ve consented: email with a working unsubscribe and your postal address, texts only to people who opted in, with a working opt-out. Notices about a paid order are transactional; keep promotions out of them. Have counsel review your versions.
SUBJECT [Product] Is Back PREVIEW you asked us to tell you first. here it is. [First name], [product] is back in stock. You signed up to hear when it returned, so you're hearing before we tell anyone else. We restocked [quantity or "a limited batch"]; the last run sold out in [time], so if you're due, now's the time. [Reorder button] Thanks for waiting. [Name], [Brand] [Unsubscribe link] · [Postal address]
[Brand]: [Product] is back. You asked us to text you first, so here's your link before we tell anyone else: [link] Reply STOP to opt out.
SUBJECT A Heads-Up About Your [Product] PREVIEW it's out until around [date]. here are your options. [First name], you usually reorder [product] about now, and we've run out. The next batch arrives around [date]. It's out because [honest one-line reason: demand was higher than we planned / our supplier is late]. Three options: 1. Get a reminder the day it's back: [link] 2. Try [named alternative], which [one line on why it's close]: [link] 3. [If you have stock of a larger size or bundle] Get it in the [size/bundle] we still have: [link] [Name], [Brand] [Unsubscribe link] · [Postal address]
SUBJECT Your Order [Number] Will Ship Later Than We Said PREVIEW new date inside, and a one-click cancel if you'd rather. [First name], we can't ship [product] by [original date] as promised. Our new estimate is [revised date], because [reason]. If that works, you don't need to do anything. If you'd rather cancel, click here for a full refund: [link] We're sorry for the wait. [Name], [Brand]
Send before the original date passes. The FTC’s Mail, Internet, or Telephone Order Merchandise Rule sets when you need the customer’s consent and when silence is enough; have counsel map your cases to it.
SUBJECT We're Retiring [Product], and You're the First to Know PREVIEW the last day to order, a way to stock up, and what we'd try next. [First name], you've ordered [product] [n] times, so I wanted you to hear this from me before we tell anyone else. We're retiring [product] on [date]. The honest reason: [reason]. What that means for you: - You can order it until [date], up to [cap] units: [link] - We think [replacement] is the closest match, because [reason]. We're putting a free sample in your next order so you can try it while you still have [product]. - If you subscribe, we'll ask before changing anything. If you have questions, reply to this email. It comes to me. [Founder name], [Brand] [Unsubscribe link] · [Postal address]
[Brand]: 3 days left to order [product] before we retire it. Stock up (up to [cap]) or try [replacement]: [link] Reply STOP to opt out.
SUBJECT We're Changing [Product]. Here's Exactly What's Different PREVIEW what changes, what doesn't, and a sample before it's yours. [First name], starting with orders after [date], [product] will [specific change: a new supplier for X / a lighter scent / a new fit through the waist]. What stays the same: [the things they chose it for]. Why we changed it: [honest reason]. What you'll notice: [texture / smell / taste / fit, plainly]. Your next order includes a sample of the new version. If it isn't right for you, reply and tell us. To stock up on the current version while it lasts: [link], up to [cap] units. [Name], [Brand] [Unsubscribe link] · [Postal address]
SENT 7 days after the free sample arrives, to the test group only
QUESTION "If [original] were no longer available, would you reorder
[replacement] instead?"
Yes / Maybe / No
FOLLOW-UP "What would it need to be closer to what you use now?"
READ Share of Yes among core dependents. Under half: find a
better replacement before announcing.
PRODUCT name, SKU(s):
CHANGE stockout / retirement / reformulation / cut / merge:
DATE last day of the old version:
WHY one line:
BUYERS, 12 MONTHS total: dependents: core:
REVENUE AT RISK from the tool in chapter 7, no plan / with plan:
REPLACEMENT product, and test result (share of Yes):
LAST BUY units, from dependents' usage:
MESSAGES dates for notice, sample, reminders, subscriptions:
ROLLBACK LINE the dependents' 90-day ordering rate that would
make us reverse or extend:
OWNERS operations: retention:
READ ON day 30 / 60 / 90 dates:
This is one chapter of The Catalog, which is free and readable in full on a single page with no form in front of it.