Part two · Winning the stranger · Chapter 7

THE BRIEF: OFFER, ANGLE, AUDIENCE, FORMAT

Most creative briefs say what the ad should look like. The ones that produce winners also say what it’s selling, why it matters, and to whom.

Creative is the biggest lever left in paid social. The platforms have taken over targeting and bidding; what you control is what the ad says and who it says it to. Yet most briefs I see are a format request: “three UGC videos and two statics for the spring launch.” That brief can produce a good ad by luck. It can’t produce a lesson.

A brief that teaches has four parts, and each one is a decision you can test separately.

PartThe questionExample
OfferWhat exactly are we selling, at what price and on what terms?The starter set, full price, free exchanges for 60 days
AngleWhy would this person care, in their words?“I’ve tried five of these and they all broke”
AudienceWho is it for, and how much do they already know?People who’ve bought a cheaper version and been let down
FormatHow does it show up in the feed?A 20-second side-by-side durability test, filmed on a phone

Format is last on purpose. It’s the part everyone can see, so it gets all the attention, and it’s the part least likely to be why an ad won. Two ads in the same format with different angles usually differ more than two ads with the same angle in different formats.

Test the message before the format. The format is how you say it; the angle is what you’re saying.

How much the audience already knows

In 1966 the copywriter Eugene Schwartz published Breakthrough Advertising, and two of its ideas still decide whether an angle works Published. The first is the state of awareness: how much the reader already knows about their problem, the kinds of solutions and your product. People who don’t yet feel the problem need the problem named; people who already know your product need a reason to act today. Modern marketers usually label the stages unaware, problem-aware, solution-aware, product-aware and most aware. Those labels are later shorthand for Schwartz’s descriptions, but they’re useful.

What they knowLead withA typical miss
Nothing about the problemA story or moment they recognizeLeading with the product’s features
The problem, not the solutionsNaming the problem better than they canLeading with price
The kinds of solutionWhy this kind is better, with a demonstrationClaiming to be the best without showing it
Your product, not convincedProof: reviews, comparisons, guaranteesExplaining what the product is again
Your product, ready to buyThe offer and a reason to act nowAnother brand video

The second idea is market sophistication: how many competitors have already made your claim. In a new category, stating the benefit plainly works. Once everyone has said “the most comfortable,” you need a bigger claim, then a new mechanism, then an identity the buyer wants to belong to. Schwartz numbered five stages. You don’t need the numbers. You need to notice when your best claim has become the category’s wallpaper.

Where angles come from

Not from the brand deck. From customers, in their own words. Read the 3-star reviews of your product and your competitors’: they say what people hoped for and what almost stopped them. Read support tickets from people who haven’t bought yet. Read the comments under your ads. Put the exact phrases in the brief. The best angles I’ve seen were a customer sentence that nobody on the team would have written.

Brief so you can learn

A one-page brief template is in Appendix B.

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