Copy them, then rewrite them in your brand’s voice. Keep the structure.
FRONT YOUR FIRST MOVE Tonight, after you brush your teeth: two capsules with a glass of water. Then leave the jar on your nightstand. BACK Days 1 to 14 [ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ][ ] Missed a day? Nothing resets. Just pick up again. When to judge it: after about [4 weeks]. Not before. Questions: [support address]
HEADLINE One quick thing so it doesn't end up in a drawer.
Q1 When will you first use it?
( ) The day it arrives ( ) Next morning
( ) Next evening ( ) Pick a day: [date]
Q2 Where will you keep it?
( ) Bathroom ( ) Kitchen ( ) Nightstand ( ) Gym bag
CONFIRM Got it. We'll remind you [day], [time of day].
HOLDOUT Random 20% of orders don't see this block.
STORE plan_day, plan_place on the customer profile.
SUBJECT Your First Move, Tonight
PREVIEW one step, two minutes, then leave it by the sink
BODY It's arrived. Here's the only thing to do first:
[first move, word for word from the card].
You said [plan_day], [plan_place]. That's the moment.
Everything else can wait. We'll send the next step
in two days.
FOOTER [Brand, postal address]
Unsubscribe from these emails: [link]
[Brand]: It's [plan_day]. Your first move: [first move, under 100 characters]. Reply HELP for help. Reply STOP to opt out.
DAY 0 The first move (card, email, text: same words)
DAY 2 What to expect, and when to judge it
DAY 7 The technique that makes it work
DAY 14 The common problem; missed a day? nothing resets
DAY 28 The first real result; the next way to use it
DAY 50+ Only what's new
TRIGGERS Address change: resend the first move and the card.
First missed gap: make coming back one tap.
RULE One job per message. Each tells them the next step.
Q1 Have you used [product] yet?
( ) Yes, the day it came ( ) Yes, 1 to 3 days after
( ) Yes, 4 to 7 days after ( ) Yes, 8 to 14 days after
( ) Not yet
IF NOT YET
Q2 What's in the way? (free text)
Q3 When do you plan to start? ( ) Tomorrow ( ) This week ( ) Pick a day
RULES Ask once. Hold out a random 20% who never get it.
Read every Q2 answer weekly and sort into the six
reasons in chapter 4.
WHY THEY STAY habit / search costs / switching costs, with evidence
WHAT THEY LOSE each item: built by them, or added by us?
BY LEAVING
ADDED BY US remove or soften by: [date] owner:
REORDER CHECK one tap, same item, price shown? Y / N
LEAVING CHECK steps to cancel or pause vs steps to join
RESENTMENT SIGNALS "trapped," "can't cancel," "tricked," per 1,000
orders, this quarter vs last
DOUBLE JEOPARDY repeat rate vs three peers our size
This is one chapter of Used, Not Bought, which is free and readable in full on a single page with no form in front of it.