Messages, copy and briefs to adapt. Every marketing message carries a working opt-out, and consent wording needs counsel’s review.
SUBJECT Your Next Order Ships Friday
PREVIEW skip it, move it or change it in one tap
Hi {first_name},
Your next {product} ships Friday, {date}, for {price}.
Want it then? You don't need to do anything.
Not yet? [Skip this one] [Move the date]
Need a break? [Pause for a month]
Something different? [Change product or frequency]
If you'd rather stop, you can [cancel here] in one step.
{brand}
You're receiving this because you have an active subscription.
Marketing emails: [unsubscribe]. {postal address}
{brand}: your {product} ships Fri {date} for {price}. Not yet?
Skip, move or pause: {short_link}. To cancel: {short_link2}.
Reply STOP to opt out.
SUBJECT Running Low On {Product}?
PREVIEW reorder in one tap, or we'll check back later
Hi {first_name},
Most people finish {product} in about {median_days} days, and it's
been {days_since} since yours arrived.
[Reorder in one tap]
Not yet? [Remind me in two weeks]. We'll check back then, and not
before.
{brand}
[Unsubscribe] {postal address}
SUBJECT How Did It Go?
PREVIEW good or bad, it helps the next person decide
Hi {first_name},
You've had your {product} for {days} days. Would you tell other
people how it's going? Good, bad or mixed, an honest review helps
the next person decide.
[Write a review]
Totally up to you. Every customer gets this same email.
{brand}
[Unsubscribe] {postal address}
SUBSCRIPTION TOGGLE (beside the button)
( ) One-time {price}
( ) Subscribe {sub_price} every {interval} days
Most people finish one in about {median_days} days.
After your first order: {ongoing_price}. Skip, change or
cancel any time from your account or your reminder text.
CHECKOUT CONFIRMATION (above the pay button, subscription only)
[ ] I want {product} every {interval} days at {ongoing_price},
charged on shipment until I cancel. I can cancel online any time.
ADD-ON (unticked, near the order total)
[ ] Package protection, {price}: if it's lost or damaged in transit,
we'll replace it.
EMAIL SIGN-UP (unticked)
[ ] Email me when it's time to reorder, and when you restock.
SMS SIGN-UP (unticked, separate; have counsel review)
[ ] Text me offers and reorder reminders. By checking this box I agree
to receive recurring automated marketing texts from {brand} at the
number provided. Consent is not a condition of purchase. Msg
frequency varies. Msg and data rates may apply. Reply STOP to
opt out, HELP for help. [Terms] [Privacy]
1. A deadline is a real date and time, the same for every customer.
It is never extended, and the timer never resets.
2. An offer called final, last chance or ending does not return at the
same or a better price for at least 30 days.
3. Stock messages come from inventory, update live, and appear only
below a threshold we can defend.
4. Activity messages ("12 people viewing") are real and current, or
they are off.
5. Every "was" price is a price we charged openly for a substantial
period. In the EU, the prior price is the lowest of the last 30 days.
6. New apps that show urgency are checked against this first.
Owner: {name}.
OFFER what, how deep, to whom:
THE TRUE REASON shipping cutoff / batch / price change / season:
GROUPS A real deadline ({hours}h) / B no deadline / C holdout
SIZE PER GROUP customers: (sized in advance)
PRIMARY METRIC orders per customer over 60 days
GUARDRAILS unsubscribes / complaints / discount per extra order
RULE no extension; no return of this offer for 30 days
IF A BEATS B we will:
IF IT CAN'T TELL we will:
OWNER name, and the date it will be read (day 60):
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